This year my first goal is skate boarding. Because it is so fun! It all ways feels like your floating on air. I like it because you get to do tricks and stuff. So that is one of my goal for next year.
Now for my second goal it is writing. Writing an essay on something you want it to be is a lot funner than writing a topic on something our teacher gives you isn't that fun. So that is cool when Mr. Lesire lets me pick some of my topics! (now that's cool!) Thats why I need to get it to an a plus.So that is my second goal for this year.
Math can be fun but it is usually not but sometimes Mr.Lesire makes it fun. Math is a hard subject for me because I cant get it, most of the time. So I'm hoping to get my math up to an A plus.
Those are my goals for next year. I hope that I can accomplish them next year. And plus I'm going to be an 8Th grader next year I think stuff is going to get easier next year.But I'm looking forward to learn that new trick on my skate board!
In your first paragraph, I think you mean "board" instead of broad.
ReplyDeleteWhat is your specific goal for writing? You mentioned that you like to write topics of your own choice, but you didn't state anything you want to accomplish.
Other than these two things, I think this is a great essay. I hope you continue to work just as hard as you have this year. If you do, I have no doubts whatsoever that you will accomplish every goal you set for yourself.